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27th Dec 2018, 9:42 PM in The Desperate and the Dying
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27th Dec 2018, 9:42 PM
JammyTheBirb
Another reason we made this story was with the aim of humanising Finn. Also, it's just nice to see more of Twigs, who hasn't had much limelight.

Comments:

28th Dec 2018, 4:23 PM
junoro
Wow, this was a neat experiment! I really love the way the words and pictures play off each other! Also really neat to get more of Finn when he's not a huge jerk. XD

A couple suggestions: If you could use a bigger font, that would be wonderful. I found zooming in made the words blurry.
Also, the white text on a black background was pretty hard on my eyes and I found them getting tired at least once a page. That might be more of a personal thing, but if you guys make longer stories, it'll be harder to binge with the eyestrain.

I'm excited to see what you do next!
28th Dec 2018, 4:33 PM
JammyTheBirb
Thanks so much for the feedback! Those are some good points, I'll definitely take them on board. The background thing definitely requires some thought, hopefully I can figure something better out.

Thanks! :D